I love this picture. Is so happy, and in so many ways. Great work!

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wow.... i love it....such a great idea!

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looks so colorful and beautiful! i love it!!

This one's cute and childish

the composition and lighting are wonderful. her expression is playful and sexy. childish, yet womanly. i wish i could give you more advanced comments, but the photo is sincerely great as it is. fantastic job!

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Gorgeous, I love it, the concept, the composition, the lighting, everything I think

very nicely done


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bernie

sweet composition - greatly done !

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Composition of the image is great- well placed angles draw the viewer into the image. I take issue with her eye in this shot- it looks almost lazy- I'd prefer to see it slightly more open (she's squinting) as opposed to it''s half lidded current state.

Slightly re-angling the melon to match the 'pitch' of the eye would also help reinforce the strong diagonals in this image.

There is alot of blank skin on the right side of the image. Brnig her arm around a bit more to the left to increast the diagonal instead of the nearly vertical arm line currently present. Also, raising her shoulder a bit may help bring this composition in tighter.

Just my opinions- I love the shot to begin with, Deviant just said 'advanced critique'

Jason

hahahah that is just hilarious
such a funny idea, and your model looks like she might fall asleep she is o relaxed....with a melon...on her head....lol soggy
great photo

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