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Composition of the image is great- well placed angles draw the viewer into the image. I take issue with her eye in this shot- it looks almost lazy- I'd prefer to see it slightly more open (she's squinting) as opposed to it''s half lidded current state.
Slightly re-angling the melon to match the 'pitch' of the eye would also help reinforce the strong diagonals in this image.
There is alot of blank skin on the right side of the image. Brnig her arm around a bit more to the left to increast the diagonal instead of the nearly vertical arm line currently present. Also, raising her shoulder a bit may help bring this composition in tighter.
Just my opinions- I love the shot to begin with, Deviant just said 'advanced critique'
Jason
such a funny idea, and your model looks like she might fall asleep she is o relaxed....with a melon...on her head....lol soggy
great photo
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